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Post by Mezzaphor on Dec 3, 2014 17:49:22 GMT
I've decided Trixie has a pillow with her cutie mark printed on it. I toyed with the idea of her having a body pillow of herself, but I fear that'd be too silly for this fic.
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Post by Mezzaphor on Dec 5, 2014 18:24:00 GMT
Bluh. The part I'm writing now, I've got two different big ideas I need to cover in a single conversation, but I'm not sure how to integrate them smoothly.
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Post by Mezzaphor on Dec 5, 2014 21:25:48 GMT
Ha! I did it! Kind of took the story to a weird place, too. I wonder if I foreshadowed it too much.
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Post by Applelight Limited on Dec 6, 2014 0:20:15 GMT
Cool, I can't wait to see what you did!
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Post by japaneseteeth on Dec 6, 2014 1:39:49 GMT
This ought to be fun.
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Post by Applelight Limited on Dec 6, 2014 2:19:14 GMT
I've done nothing constructive over the last three days on account of this cough, messed up sleeping patterns and then the worry over my gran (she's OK btw). I hope to snap out of this rut and get some more work on my fic done asap. I'll regret not using this free time better when it's gone and I'm back in work.
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Post by Mezzaphor on Dec 6, 2014 3:58:10 GMT
If you want you can read what I've got so far here. I got up to a good break in the story, and I probably won't be able to write any more tonight or tomorrow.
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Post by Applelight Limited on Dec 6, 2014 4:06:09 GMT
Thank you. I'm going to go read that and get back to you.
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Post by japaneseteeth on Dec 6, 2014 4:21:38 GMT
Weren't you reading my Nanowrimo thing, too?
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Post by Applelight Limited on Dec 6, 2014 4:24:29 GMT
I was yes. I'll get back to you on that too. So much reading to do!
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Post by japaneseteeth on Dec 6, 2014 4:59:13 GMT
You poor bum. That thing is like 80% padding and infodumps. How far did you get so far?
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Post by Applelight Limited on Dec 6, 2014 13:30:11 GMT
Only the first page. I am terribly slow at reading. Only my writing is slower than my reading. That's so slow it's practically stationary. . Plus a lot came up in the meantime that pulled me away from it.
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Post by japaneseteeth on Dec 6, 2014 15:20:56 GMT
Yeah, I can see that.
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Post by japaneseteeth on Dec 7, 2014 1:19:35 GMT
Doubleposting because I finally made a bit of headway on my new project. Here's what I have so far.The short version is that I want the prose to reflect the fact that Spike isn't aware that he's dreaming at first, and I just want to make sure that it's surreal to the reader but not too clear that it's a dream until Luna knocks him into lucidity.
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Post by Applelight Limited on Dec 7, 2014 1:32:00 GMT
Had a look, and left some comments. Not a bad start.
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